All Comments on 'I Needed That'

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Great...

...read. I liked this very much.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
lovely hun!

i can relate! very nice job and a very sad subject!

i enjoyed reading this!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
I'm impressed

Great poem. I really mean that!

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Unwinding in slow motion

or is it unraveling? regardless, I really like the wrap up, especially "My heart slows to the cadence of someone else's world"...well done!

~Merry

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