All Comments on '"I tremble..."'

I really enjoyed this writing, the end was amazing.

Keep writing.

Byron lives!

thank you for sharing..enjoyed it!

to anticipation or under use, TK U MLJ LV NV

were you inebriated

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.

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hm, can't believe i haven't looked at your poetry yet... have to read more now...

Passion abounds, brought to life by an erotic picture of a woman's beautiful curves...along with sensual words. Excellent.

The sensuousness of some of your lines are arousing. "...Bridges in revisited folds." Intensely erotic! Beautiful rendering. Loved the picture.

One of the rare poets on the site who consistently weds words to quality images.

for a lovely poem!

to fall upon your words and devour each, then became splashed with warm paint

Your poems are always excellent... it's impossible not to see your tremendous passion. I've missed reading them... :)

as usual, my dear Lauren. Thank you.

and an image. A slightly fermented passion... well done.

jim : )

In image, milieu, and feel through word.

I had your lyrical ear and way with words. Excellent, as usual.

-Colly

Great marriage of image and words!