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All Comments on 'I used to Dance'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Saddly Sweeet ~!!

I could just see this lil heavenly fairy dancing to one. Wonderful sweet, simple imagery.

Nice flow. Held tight till the end.

Poor lil one ... Go get'm gurl ~!!!

* Smiles *

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
~~

lovely metaphor

wrapping life in dance

to mask the pain

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice

I felt it get a little loose at the end but got the

visual and fell into it. sandspike

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