All Comments on 'I Want'

now we expect more of these brilliant poems from you in the future ;-)

It was perfect the first time I saw it, and it was perfect when I read it again today.

You are a good little witch, your writing always seems sprinkled with sparkly, pink magic.

Simply lovely.

I had a hard time getting into this one... I think its really well done--I just think I'm not much of a poetry guy. The last few lines were my favorite, though.

You took us a different route for the challenge, and i love it :)

Mm. I want that. Lovely imagery and nice flow to the verses.

~Luna