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f-cynyrf-cynyralmost 18 years ago
wow

that left me spent, and drained. i really enjoyed the ride, good strong images, and nice flow to the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I want

I loved the pacy flow of this, great imagery. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
HoTT...

and visual...2 nice combos..blue

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
I want...

what you said <grin a very erotic and sizzling write (~_~)

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 18 years ago
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Some powerful imagery. I especially liked:

"as gag reflexes pass

and full throttle

mutation flares again"

BD

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