All Comments on 'I want her'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The imagery is almost too real!

Many authors seem to feel it takes 30 pages of grunts and groans to tell an erotic story. The eroticism is in the imagery, not in the words!

sacksackover 18 years ago
very telling arrangement....

of words on the page....enhances the effect of this little gem!

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