by Jennifer C
This is one of the finest poems I've ever read. I wasn't sure it was even possible to convey so many powerful emotions with so few words, yet you did just that.
I love your storys and poems.Also I want to say thank you for commenting on my poems.
candy
Powerful, soul-rending verse
Of pain that dies at the end of time
Making the reader want to reach out
To comfort, console, and end the pain
Got to agree with skip. Your writing is superb, J. I love your work. (In my imagination I also love you!)
with Sexy Vixxxen below. She has hit the nail right on the head. You writing is superb, Jennifer. I always imagine myself as the recipient, though - am I egotistic? Or do I just admire your work?
heartfelt images to pull the threads of hearts abound...nicely penned...bluerains
My absolute favorite of your work, Jenn! Besides deeply and personally relating to the feelings you expressed here in your words, you pulled from your pen that sixth element of writer's success I believe in~ the sense of... linger. This piece has lingered with Me since I voted on it earlier today, and will probably dwell in My head for the rest of the night <smile> You hit the right emotional button with this one, woman!
Vixxx
has a way of changing perceptions in life. it certainly shows here......nicely done jennifer........don
I think we as women have so been there..
Err not to leave the men out.
Just I too understand and can feel your pain.
Wonderfully heartfelt sad poem..
Huggs to ya Hun*
for a whole lot of people, the tear and crack in the foundation of a relationship is there and you just don't know if it will hoild or not, every day waiting to see if perhpas the crack in the concrete can fix itself <grin> great perspective and awesome write J~
Parallel thoughts or parallel human experience?
Whichever way it hurts
b'brig
when you have been hurt, a broken heart takes along time to heal. Lovely heart felt poetry, raw and real and well written.