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i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum. please feel free to come along and join in. (the 50% temp rating is so that it does not alter other temp ratings). Welcome to Literotica! - wildsweetone

Welcome to Lit with the nice piece of erotica sharing that special morning moment when he wakes you...

This poem is really well done — it manages to be genuinely erotic (i.e. it excites) and is poetic at the same time. It has the urgent shape and rhythm of sex. which so many forget to put into the poem. Very hot.