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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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not

fast

enuff

comment was on the ice; 100!

PoetGuyPoetGuyabout 13 years ago
Quite lovely

and quite funny, as well. Poet Guy assumes, then, that this is not haiku. Or can haiku be funny? In any case, well done.

AngelineAngelineabout 13 years ago
Lovely

And I really like how "spring" works as both noun and verb.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
teeheehee

has nice words that i like, and it is kewl, not cold, but kewl.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
Fricken dissapearing comments!

This one is an excellent haiku. Bravo. Most try here, few succeed. You did.

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