All Comments on 'If I were a smarter woman'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Sounds like a woman at the end of her rope with only the superficial keeping her afloat.

4degrees4degreesabout 17 years ago
i liked

this in the 30/30, and had thought 'man that one should be submitted.' glad you received my telepathic nudge.

the <i>ifs, ands</i> and <i>buts</i> are infinite it seems.

always enjoy your stuff.

lindianalindianaabout 17 years ago
Wonderful

You captured an image in a few words. Well done.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Certainly very interesting..

and leaves food for thought....

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in today's New Poems Reviews.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
nice flow

in the visuals...blue

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