All Comments on 'Ilara One'

but got a bit distracted with the dots and dashes. The dashes worked at first, but you used so many they lost their impact. I wondered on the dots whether you actually wanted them or whether you were trying to isolate that word. If you want to do that without the dots when posting the poem you can insert a series of   each one will give you a single blank space. Anyway, a very good poem.

jim : )