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particularly lines like "looking for handholds in the rock face" which he found both vivid and so accurate. He's no so fond of the all lowercase conceit, but knows some people write this way.

This is a corker. You're getting 100 from me and a recommend. By the by, I miss the old book covers from the 60s and 70s too.

thanks everyone!

What a wonderful read that I had to go back and read over and over again, definitely a 5

You posted some pretty sharp things here ages ago. I see you haven't lost the touch. Good stuff.

Five.

in this narrative, slice of life kind of poem. Lots of interesting appealing images (like candy colored type), and I love especially those last few lines--and social justice fetish is great. That's my kind of fetish, too! Good to read you here again, m_c.