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by Syana

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annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
welcome

Welcome to poetry Syana, I see you have been busy with your stories! Good going! You have an easy feel to your poem-- soothing and thoughtful. Keep writing, we will keep reading!

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
Nice one

Maybe its about your lover or just relationships in

general. Either way it's a good one.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
This one is very nice...

the best of yours I have read so far. A nice easy flow enhances the effect.

jim :)

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