All Comments on 'in my flying dream last night'

picture painted here. I love that she shares your vision-very cool.

...do have a way. Reading your work is consistently enjoyable, always more there than meets the first eye, and always handled with surety. As always, a morning pleasure to see one of your poem's appear on my screen!

...do have a way. Reading your work is consistently enjoyable, always more there than meets the first eye, and always handled with surety. As always, a morning pleasure to see one of your poem's appear on my screen!

should always be flying in your dreams, with the one you love so much!! beautiful poem Steve :)

A good redition of a common dream,

but why only one dally?

You had a whole dream in which to play.

Maybe you don't need the "a" ??

the message in the write, steve. Those flying dreams are the ones you want, they reflect the happiness you feel while your awake, then to share with another is even better.

...erotically charged. Maybe it is in the wrong category?

It cetainly has a lovely, airy feel to it.

think you could tighten it up a bit. Extra words detract from the picture you paint- and it is a liberating picture!