All Comments on 'in the keep'

by oxalis

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Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
this is

probably one of your best...lovely peaceful read so early in the morn

Elda FurryElda Furryabout 20 years ago
it's been too long, ox

Why did I let you slip away from me. Probably because you didn't write like this way back then!

Elda FurryElda Furryabout 20 years ago
I'm so bad

I didn't click the 100 thingy the first time around. Your poem had me so excited. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
my eyes

still sleepy and easily led

lived this poem word by word

and they do not want to leave

the blankets

it is raining, but the freeze

has melted

echoes_sechoes_sabout 20 years ago
This is simply

beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Simply.....

....lovely. Thank you.

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
I wish....

I had your talent. I will read more of your work.

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