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Click hereThe energy of just living
in the realm of love
will not elude me
It is breathing essence into being
It is the innate understanding of
who I am and
who I am to be
Love is a verb, it makes us who we were meant to become...
Kinda convoluted..........an inexplicitable description of acceptance
This has me going in circles of thought. The first stanza says the energy of living in love will not elude. Therefore the narrator is trapped in that energy, or taps into that energy. Clear so far. Then " It is breathing essence into being". I get an image of the narrator being filled with that energy, sparked by it. Still ok. But the last three lines elude me. How does energy understand? There is something vaguely off in the logic, but I actually like the effect. Maybe it's a tense problem, not sure.