- Non-Erotic Poetry
- In the Spring
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Hey, Bud-dy,
let's spend the morning together
while the parchment of the day
unfolds.
Hopefully,
there will be no wrinkles,
Coffee?
Look there,
where the vapors of the fog
fall apart, like rotten cloth,
far beyond mending.
Beautiful, eh?
See the moss valanced pond
spill from the tattered mist
emerging from cover
to reveal the kiss of fish
and nymph
What? Go fishing?
Sure.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThere are some really good parts to this one, and some parts I'd change, but I think I should leave it at that.
Five.
greenmountaineerabout 11 years agoI liked this, but I think "Coffee" in the first stanza was superfluous when the warmth of friendship had a greater affect later in the poem.
twelveooneabout 11 years agoone of those wtf moments, s2 may be the best, but then
et's spend the morning together
while the parchment of the day
unfolds.
Hopefully,
there will be no wrinkles,
this does have a moment
5ed as per usual
