All Comments on 'In the Spring'

one of those wtf moments, s2 may be the best, but then

et's spend the morning together

while the parchment of the day

unfolds.

Hopefully,

there will be no wrinkles,

this does have a moment

5ed as per usual

Buddy ! Time well spent .

I liked this, but I think "Coffee" in the first stanza was superfluous when the warmth of friendship had a greater affect later in the poem.

i'd cut the last two but i understand why you kept them

There are some really good parts to this one, and some parts I'd change, but I think I should leave it at that.

Five.

good poem - seemingly off-hand... Thanks!