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Wrote this Thursday night...

That you paint pictures, visual and emotional, very clear pictures? Yes you do. And you just combined two of my favorite things

This caught my eye on the Random list of poems. Not sure how I missed seeing it at the time - or missed seeing it properly. Perhaps I missed that day or I was tired and blind.

This is so lovely. The direct picture of being in the late afternoon with someone prior to going indoors.

And the subtext.

Breaks your heart.