All Comments on 'Indelible Stains'

Moving, and beautifully written. Well done!

Well done. Like your weird line breaks. It disturbs the eye the way your subject matter disturbs the mind.

I also liked what you did with the line breaks and syntax.

This is powerful. Assault, even sexual, happens more among people who know one another. The victim here is more disgusted than afraid. I liked your oblique references to those disturbing feelings.