by dorksicle
You always have something to say.
And I always wind up wishing you'd say a little more when you write. I think you should extend your writing out a bit, and push and test yourself.
I am quite sure your writing is strong enough to keep its cohesion in pieces that are a bit longer, and would be more satisfying, at least to me.
Way too brief
But powerful in impact;
Leaving the reader to complete the write
In his own subjective ways.