All Comments on 'Insatiable'

by Chris Cross

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
an insult

keep your pants zipped when you try to ride on the popularity of a music..this is an insult to the great Darren Hayes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Almost!

Stanza 2 line 5 should read "lie back" not "like back". How on earth did you miss that?

I want to be constructive when I say that this is school-level poetry - sing-song and trivial as poetry. The idea is OK, the words OK, but the desperate adherence to rhythm and metre is immature.

I shall remember your prose and easily forget your poetry!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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