All Comments on 'Inspiration'

This is an inspiration!

It's beautiful and moving

and the imagery is wonderful.

Great, great writing!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

is not so much inspiring ...but...alluring and sizzled by the sea siren...blue

....in the new poems review thread.

Tess

I loved this! Of course, I love any wet and ocean bound poem, as it represents, to me, the power of all things sexual. These two stanzas especally stand out:

"Sighs as first trace of wind

reaches the outcropping,

a silent hot breath, the

rock seems harder, taller.

Spit of wind captures

growing swells, bringing fullness,

desire to the parched beach,

groping threads of seaweed."

Your semiotics in these lines capture the lead up, and thirst of sex, which you later quench.

Well done. :)

Wow, I love this thought process.

Such beautiful imagery, and flow.

The beach is oft something I ponder and dream about.

Here you have breathed life into my dreams ... yet again~!!

Love this poem.~!!