All Comments on 'Intimacy'

i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum. please feel free to come along and join in and welcome to Literotica! (the 50% temp rating is so that it will not affect other ratings) - wildsweetone

Welcome to Lit and congrats on earning a little greenie on your first go. A fine piece unveiling that special moment when you roll over onto the other side of the bed to absorb the afterglow of your love.

I like poems that tell a story. I like funny poems. I like poems that gives me images of what the poem is about. Your poem gave me plenty of images. I could see the white sheets and the rumpled bed. By the way, you have a wonderful body, only, you should have worn a nightgown. I was embarrassed.

Nonetheless, I loved your poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Full of beautiful, familiar, sensual images.