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Very hot. I never thought my cumming could be so tell-tale! But I suppose we are pretty vulnerable when we finally let go...

and I mirror the sentiment of others. This is good.

This poem, like a mouthful of sperm, contains huge number of ideas in a small space. I just felt one more sweep through the language would have improved it, and occasionally your usually adroit sense of rhythm escapes you. I hope you don't mind me saying so--I really enjoyed the poem.

loved it! wonderful words and descriptions

... the idea of eons crammed into one space, one time, one act. Beautiful.

This poem was mentioned in today's New Poetry Recommendations in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum.<br><br>

This is an unexpected approach to the experience of giving a blowjob. The poetic craft evidenced here is also a pleasure to experience.

Actually left me a little bit dizzy...