All Comments on 'Invitation'

im curious...

Suck vivid images of a sensual moment. They create such a nice mood.

your words painted that moment of awakening, of passion and heat. I could close my eyes and feel your words. Once again, lovely work.

~Tink

...that moment of awakening, ezpecially if you awaken before your lover, after a special night is both wonderfully romantic and erotic.

Such sensual images you created with your words!

~Honey

truly embodied so much passion....

it captured it with nice elegance and go movement throughout the poem.

very very hot.

***let's act it out!***

Direct and sincere and so very sexy. Nicely done, Moonie!

Gotta love waking up to the scent of a steamy sensual night and taking it again from there ;)

A nice soft morning wake-up call.