All Comments on 'It Fades'

I really liked this one. The message is at first a bit cryptic, but it gradually makes itself clear. Nitpicker that I am, I must say that I felt that certain stanzas should have been grouped together, because they had similar thoughts in them. I know you were trying to keep the form of the text, but still. In specific:

"The Halcyon days / Turned to Halcion nights"

and

"Timeless summer days ground / Into endless winter nights"

"The wonder of the world / Stained mundane with time"

and

"The innocence of life / Taken with experience"

"Potential narrowed down / To the eventually probable"

and

"Freedom of exploration / Chained in responsibility"

Structure, message and mood all come together. Nice