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Apple_of_Edenover 9 years agoAuthorNicely done! Thanks!
Ashesh9..Very Good! Nicely done...wish I could pull up the poem and add it in!
KingCuddlealmost 7 years agoWorth polishing.
I'm bumping on "hard shell" and "cracking it open"...
Not how I think of a seed.
At the minimum, maybe some growth phase,
later than the opening line?
4.75...?
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