All Comments on 'It's like this'

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demure101 over 11 years ago

if only

everyone were that lucky!

tazz317 over 11 years ago

BUT WHAT IS ITS NOT

we can always dream. TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoone over 11 years ago

i.m sorry

right now it looks like an exotic hallmark card

maybe it was the glow of a computer screen

didn't vote yet, hope to come back to it

Aslieas over 11 years ago

erotic

This is truly erotic, and it is truly poetry. Ignore the comment about the computer screen. Some people think poetry has to be like it was before our time, before Coca-cola, subways and the Empire State Building. You wrote things that you can see and touch, and that is why this poem "touches" me.

WillOtheWisp over 10 years ago

Shades....

...of Elizabeth Browning. Someone in your life is very lucky. 5.