All Comments on 'its only because i deserve you'

by steve porter

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Maria2394Maria2394over 20 years ago
your advantage

Steve, in my opinion, is that you feel and are not afraid to show it and this is an excellent example of your depth and ability to express!! wonderful, beautiful poem :)

AngelineAngelineover 20 years ago
I agree with Maria

This poem is so honest and full of conviction that it glows. I've seen a few examples of this sort of poem lately--simple statements of appealing clarity. Great job, dear man. :)

LiarLiarover 20 years ago
Yeah

Just honest love. No need to complicate it.

jthserrajthserraover 20 years ago
Straight and plain

and excellent poem of love. very good.

jim :)

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