All Comments on 'Jazz, The Way I Know It'

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flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Extraordinary promise

from this new poet. Very strong erotica, and i like the colloquial language. The jazz/musical metaphor could have been tighter, IMHO.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
This is wonderful!

Amazing rhythm and sexual tension.

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years ago
well done!

another 1 with spuratic rhyme. i know many here aren't fond of it but this poem danced so sweetly.

lovely poem hun!

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