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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Can't wait for the..summer?

I have to admit, at line four I felt a bit squirmish, but then I refocused on the peach and back on other feelings and I felt Alll right!

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