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WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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mentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotica poetry forum. Some great lines in this poem, especially: drop the needle in/her worn worn groove/or wicked scratched/and low fidelity

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Some wicked good lines in this, as the wicked lady observes. This is the third so far this year from the 5/5 thread and the best yet, leaving much for the reader to work with in this suggestively worded piece.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
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A low-fi classic.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
What a groove!

I thought, when you "drop the needle in/her worn worn groove" why the heck would that poem would not be considered as an erotic poem? It's so good it brings a smile to my face!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
*****

Five.

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