All Comments on 'Kiss Me There'

Heya Logan,

Glad you're here, grins. This poem is new to me, and of course, wonderful. I'm rereading everything else so I can vote! Once again, welcome to Lit!

Heya Logan,

Glad you're here, grins. This poem is new to me, and of course, wonderful. I'm rereading everything else so I can vote! Once again, welcome to Lit!

Kiss me there starts with the obviousness of "where" but with each interlude it's growth allows you to ride along with a voyeur's delight.

Wonderful mounting sensuality within the travels of lips' journey across skin.

might have been quicker <grin> nice poem~

Sounds like the old joke with the punchline... "So he started the truck and drove to the garbage dump."

Wow that was hot!

Loved how you kept

building up the heat

one layer at a time.

Very sensual and erotic!

Good Work.

~ J