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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Kittens

Your most poetic of the day.

The rhyme is good.

The rhythm could be better,

but you create an image for the reader to see.

It can create a smile.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I agree with YDD

This is your best to-day. You paint a nice little picture.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
sweet

sweet little poem :)

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