All Comments on 'Kitty'

This is nicely sculpted. Just tight enough to draw forth images in the mind’s eye that fade into the next as the words flow on. – Very smooth – and the ending is a delicious twist!

The only line that loses me is “Trafalgaring mating fire-beetles”. I don’t know the reference so I miss the image. :(

A very good read!

(I don't do thermometers.)

good poem. Nice images.

~Syn

It's a great balance of subtle and ironic and, yes, the ending is a great tongue-in-cheek twist. Thanks for the read. :)