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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
kneeling

The norm or correct use of using the same word to begin a line is to use it only thrice (3 time) other than that, I found this to be a nice write.

I am above morals now

I can kill anyone

I can say anything to anyone

I won’t though because maybe I might feel one day.

I won’t cry for those I cut down

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