All Comments on 'Last Man'

a rising star I see here,

witty name and twisting tale poem~

keep them coming~

Great poem .."the sun comes out with angled shadows"..Great line..You do know your imagery..The flow is great. Makes me want more of the Last Man.. Wonderful poem.. Keep them coming..

anonymous is bad, I had an unknown call just yesterday, he said, hey baby ( in a deep deep voice), are ya nekkid ( he sounded like the devil, with a slight yankee accent)? well, are ya? he hung up before I could tell him..yes, yes, oh baby, YESI AM!! whats it to ya, huh? ;)

this is cute, sarcastic, as I said in the thread, keep em comin, I like your style,

maria

always so impressed with your ability to create worlds that did not exist before... you are a true story teller... thanks for putting this on your sig line, this one slipped by me!

~anna

"I’ll see his greasy ass

curled up in the gutter someday

the rain won’t wash him away"

Really good, but I think it would be better if quit holding back and said what you really mean.