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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
OK

you have some good lines here, in that they say something different

cherry blossoms of fiction

Karmic humor run amok.

wanted something more than universal wi-fi.

let's see what happens here (out of context)

Painted on faces with crease and crow's feet.

faces painted with crease and crow's feet.

but needs a little weeding of the common universalities

I am pming you, regarding a comment.

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