tagErotic PoetryLast Time

Last Time

bySweetVA©

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remembering our last time
the way you teased
brought me right
to the edge
then pushed me over...
like a tsunami
drawing back
then overwhelming me
with a flood of sensation
doesn’t help to subdue
the memory

of the awful way
you screamed
as you left me
the way you cried
I pleaded with you
not to go
I tried everything
it wasn’t enough
to keep you
I’m left with no choice
but to find another
battery-powered friend.

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