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All Comments on 'Learning to Swim'

by Curiouswife

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Now this is a fun little read;

just picturing it in my mind...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the new poems review thread.

Tess

sacksackover 18 years ago
my favorite poem of late....

a perfectly proportioned little gem!

SavgeWolfSavgeWolfover 18 years ago
clear...

...easy...images...I like!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
This is amazing!

A very strong poem with a wonderfully subtle touch. You have handled the metaphor and the imagery deftly, CW!

Fly

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
the part about....

smacking rob was a good one. overall its message is clear....nice.......don

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