All Comments on 'Legend'

... never die (grin) thank you for this read!!! (~_~)

You caught the bitter downward turn of life and lips. Great read! (thermometer set to glowing by my personal default)

"as she dipped her eyeliner brush

and swirled it above her face

in a wistful parasail ballet"

A well crafted, solid poem. Excellent imagery (such as the lines above) and a finely honed metaphor.

I can't fault this

One of those excellent ones that deserves to be reread. The imagery here is complex and sets the imagination running.