All Comments on 'Lemon Pie in the DSMIV'

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Even lemons have their days

Laughing; Lauhing; Lauhing; I think I'd look it up under mood disorders...

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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Ok I don't know what to make of it, I would have given it an 100 without blinking, if I saw more whang, tang ~ meringue. The rhyme looks random, not fully developed. But, I can't give it a 75 - 'cause I'm scared.

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