All Comments on 'lessons with lightning bugs'

very interesting! A well-done half-Kerouac, stream-of-consciousness ramble that is difficult to effectively write, and it is done with some style and flair here by a poet who seems to be suddenly announcing that he has something important to say! I, for one, will be reading the poems this author posts from here on!

First line change "it's" to "its" and that's all I'm going to pick about. :)

"and those wow chips with the diarrhea warning on the bag"

Those chips will mess you up! lol

keep writing, keep sharing!

I loved it! There's a raw talent at work here. You have skill at taking the mind to a place where it becomes ensconced by your words, the rhythm, the unrhyming slope. Lovely job.