Let Me Take You Down

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Sweetness upon my lips

A ripe berry
covered with fresh
whipped cream

Succulent
juices dripping
from her chin

More cream
trickles between her thighs
as she picks tender
red strawberries
from fields of forever

she eats every single one she picks


First Line from "Just A Lil Taste" by LilDarlin
Last line from "black raspberry" by annaswirls

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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average ginaaverage ginaover 19 years ago
So good...

... that I need to go to the store and buy some strawberry something! Even if it some air freshener! I need to smell or taste some now!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
nice poem

and a really nice line: as she picks tender red strawberries from fields of forever

BelegonBelegonover 19 years ago
Short but sweet

pun intended. and very erotic!

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
mmm Nummmy~~!!

A Nummy Poem here~~!!! Wonderfully tasteful imagery. Just dripps..~n~ spurts right thru ya (grins)

A Big Ole Hug for using my line in this great poem ya have here. More Please~~!!

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