All Comments on 'Let Me Take You Down'

Yum! Thanks for using my line, the poem was as delicious as the berries that inspired it. :)

I found I needed to vary my diet. This works very well

for that. Just nasty enough to be "tastefull".

A different berry.... is just as sweet. This is tasty. ;)

awwwwwwwsome poetry...grin!

and this verse is yummy..

More cream

trickles between her thighs

as she picks tender

red strawberries

from fields of forever

someone used berrylicious before me lol ;-)

Succulent and juicy Miss Oatlash.

Mmm now I feel like berries and cream :)

A Nummy Poem here~~!!! Wonderfully tasteful imagery. Just dripps..~n~ spurts right thru ya (grins)

A Big Ole Hug for using my line in this great poem ya have here. More Please~~!!

pun intended. and very erotic!

and a really nice line: as she picks tender red strawberries from fields of forever

... that I need to go to the store and buy some strawberry something! Even if it some air freshener! I need to smell or taste some now!

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