All Comments on 'Lies, Deceit & Mistrust'

...what sparked this?

powerful...emotional...and well thought out!

moving poetry!

I see so much into this poem. It takes you out of this world and transfers you to the world of lies and deceit.A cold, hard , lonley place.

I love the imagery..A very deep and emotional poem here. I feel sorry for anyone having to live in that world.

Just a wonderful poem~~!!

Compromise, communicate, and sacrifice should be these words!! Tell me when it happens.

Unfortunately, I know these feelings all too well. You did a good job here. Could work on the flow a bit but this was like oh, filled with so many emotions. Like, just vent!! I think you did it for me!! Thanks for the read, Chris

touching and reveling~

what sparks most things in me....................

living it as you already know--

that's why some of my peoms are good....... and some so bad

just depends on what is happening to me in my life

at that time.

nin.

Hoping by this time you realize that all men are not alike

I think you know what I'm refering to..

ALWAYS LOOK FOR THE TRUST AND THE GOOD AND LET THE REST JUST FLOW ON BY LIKE THE WORDS IN YOUR POEM