All Comments on 'Life and Death of a Low-Level Tech'

the first part you portray is harsh enough, but I think you have defnintely captured the reality of so many peoples' working lives..I was shocked at the last part!! excellent job lostandfounder, you cynical poet you :)

Reminds me of an urban legend, but told with much more symbolism and starkness. It also gives new meaning to the phrase "working stiffs". Sorry, had to had a bit of levity...Good job! (you can keep your work tag).

Has a harsh blue fluorescent glow to it-- excellent imagery, L&F!

of repetition

"Suckle on the bosom of a vending machine

Nurtured by chemicals additives and preservatives"

Here I would have thought about taking out "Chemicals", redundant, I think it would read better a little shorter.

Bad use...

of your own time