by steve porter
nice twist on title
Damn! what can I say about this?
"barnacle, manacled"
'cept, i'll remember it and stuff it in one of mine, and always wonder how did i get so clever
This poem is so vivid, I liked the passage about the limpets and barnacles (I collect seashells!). Thanks for the great imagery!
Sack
Getting to this a little late, after reading Woodland this is an even nicer poem. The contrast between the two is awesome (I know they really don't have anything to do with each other), you do nature very nicely. Should put together a collection, take your readers from sea to woods and who knows where else. Maybe desert?