All Comments on 'life's ladder'

this is really good!I love the sing-song rhthym you have going on with your lines, this is a good one-

...For ashes to ashes and dust in lust

tornado of emotion cometh he does

really a fun read!

Truly wonderful Art...but then your poems always are. Your poetry stands alone.

did you learn how to talk like that?

"for an affinity of ruin

but budded a flower

that bloomed for awhile"

is good, fits stylistically with the rest. This is a diffucult style to pull off, without desending into the winceworthy realms, and you did hit a couple of spots along the way.

Still one has to admire...

Keep stretching, someday you will master the "four voiced charnel house from hell form" (wink)

I'm not exactly sure why, but this one irritated me a bit - Maybe that's a good thing ? I did play around trying to say the same but in a more economical form but that didn't work either. Sorry it doesn't quite work for me but I can't figure out why. Maybe it's time for bed>

Clever, creative work. ~Imp

Wonderful new side Art.

A wonderfully worded poem that plays out nicely, with care in the form of Life. Well-done, Art.

in sunday's new poems review.Nice work art!